Advancements

The kindling sparks

without remark

you

move in

with wistful grin

to alight my fire too

before hearth's door

we hit the floor

once more

it seems this is our

favorite place

alit with kindling's chore.

 

Here we find

two of a kind

mingled in embrace

the light kindly molds

your face to mine

in heavenly bliss

a sweet kiss

is passed between us.

 

Yet, that is not enough

as we yearn to heat

the room beyond

the fire's girth.

 

So we set about again

in sweet coniptions

brought on by mighty wind

that whips its sails about

the tin roof above

which calls out a happy tune

that you will be coming

home

soon

and I will not have to

remain alone

just dreaming of these

advancements.

 

 

Reviews

[Arthur Henn]

Sid, another Great! and another inspiration
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The mind play games on
The dreams we dream
The heart plays games
With what the eyes see
Emotions move
From heart to soul

Two minds that thinks alike
Embraced by your heavenly bliss
April rains, have passed
May flowers have sprung forth
The scent of spring lies upon your heart

Like a child, your eyes light up
Yet there is not enough room
To capture all your beauty
That sails with the winds of change

The sweetness you embrace
Upon the one you love
Will ever flow
Through his veins
Like the streams of nature
Nourishing the banks of
Mother Nature

Art
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Here we find
two of a kind
mingled in embrace
the light kindly molds
your face to mine
in heavenly bliss
a sweet kiss
is passed between us.

Superb!

I stoled this from you. Hope this was OK...lol

heavenly bliss.

[robin]

I think you like floors and grasses. Fiber deficiency?
My thoughts slow like molasses in your stunning hearth to me
while the light is scolding me briskly
I find you hot fire and burn friskily
coniption you are
like a fine crystal
wine I was born to sip in,

Umm, uhh...
Robin