Dreamlands Sway

Dreamlands sway

has come to play

a little with my mind

as you it seems

I find

there lurking

suavely so

crying for in utero

yet it is not your mother's womb

that you crave

but mine

and in my dreamlands sway

I can not push you away

but welcome you with loving arms

tis your midnight charms

that were always

the ones that I could not push past

yet it did not last

and I awake once again

by myself

but warmed

from your nighttime splendor

when upon my hearth's door

you welcomed me to you

once more.

 

 

Reviews

[robin]

Craving the womb a most unusual metaphor, it's okay for warm but slippery for sex. I get the sense that the dream spirit is a child which makes this very mysterious as a metaphor. Deeply romantic, androgynous again and like a teaser in that we are only warmed. Nice subtle stuff, excellent and smoooth. Suaveness to a mother's womb, yet not mother....hmmmmmm, man or woman?

[wizthom]

dreams can be so magical ,when it brings forth the love we all lone for,
so mystical yet enchanting some time it hurts to wake up,,peace my friend well writing ,
i since erotic charms in this one smile ,wizthom ps i was feeling down tll ur write place me back in dream land

[An owl on the moon]

Such a beautiful dance of dreams, written almost lyrically lulling me into another world. I love the tune and tone of every line! Marvelous!!!

Oh! This is beautiful! I love the image you painted with this! Great poem!