Waterfalls

Waterfalls

deliciously

shrouding

stones

below

the surface

of the river

deep within

the earth's

core-

 

a true

delight

on summer

nights

to hide

within

the cave

behind the

glimmering

jewel

tower

of azure

H2O

flowing

down

from

high

above

our

souls.

 

 

Reviews

[Horizons]

Now this's really a touchable piece of creativity you've just written into your poetic words. The beauty of nature, the scent, a fragrance of love, of water, of an ocean, of a heart and of course of a soul you've just once again so creatively captured here into the words of beauty. Life's totally depends on the H20 and without H20 no once can sustain the life here on an earth... The subdivision of words and beauty again i can see here in the comparison of water with soul and the coldness with summer. I've read your few stuffs and i got one thing that you've a nice technique to compare the things with anything very creatively and that's what i love always ... you know the concept of water, waterfall, soul, mankind, life, nature, beauty and so on whatever is in the life. That's all i just got from here .. by your words, from yur creative piece. An excellent imaginary you've well drafted here in this lovely piece of nature where i can feel the scent of life, of nature and of it's beauty. Well done, I really enjoyed reading this creative piece.

[Dream Weaver]

A cool refreshing piece of natural beauty.
Wonderfully etched and truly insightful.

[Justin Tobey]

I like it! Every word had a lot of strength and vividity to it, and I just love the word "shrouded." That's going to be my new word of the day! :D Overall, I think it's really good. It makes me think of a small waterfall somewhere in a tropical rainforest that's "shrouded" with mist at the bottom. :D

[Robert Luna]

Very well written piece of work here. I love how you are able to express yourself so perfect that any one that reads your words is able to feel the emotion and strength of them. I always enjoy the thoughts that your words leave laying in my mind. I always apprecaite being left to think and ponder.

Great Job!!!!!