You

Romantic

Straight down the crooked cobbled path
Of faint sounds, blue shrubs and strands of hair,
Amidst the quaint cafes of red brick walls
And wooden chairs, creamy cakes and unfettered dreams -
You.
Deep within the unspoken words and incomplete sentences
Of myriad lights and undefined borders,
Of the balanced strokes of the brush and scrawny writings,
Lives pages and pages of
You.
Etched on every grain of sand,
embroidered on every passionate wave, there is
A whisper of warmth. A story of no end.
A touch, a kiss, an overwhelming chaos, and
The unfathomable You.

Reviews

[Apollo_Nashe]

romantic and in a genius way. a display of innocent love, very well delivered and great thought was put in, i am definitely picking up new ways of delivery.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Definately deeply romantic as the three stanzas of this flowing freeverse overflow in comparisons of the one loved. A nice simple but complex piece.