SOURCE OF ME

This is my story. This is the reason why I am the way I am.

                     
There lived two beings I couldn't ever hate.
Connected by blood we were,
and capable of luring love from my heart without effort.
Their warm hugs and kisses ignited nothing but happiness,
making me feel infinite with their simple caress.

Cried on their shoulder, followed by reassurance.
Feelings I thought not possible.
But here I am, in no trance
feeling lucky of the incredible.

Showered with gifts, but not greater than their affection.
Encouraged to be the best, I lived in determination.
Tripping up, but always offered a second chance
even if not worthy of such a cause.

Their presence, much more than a powerful drug,
priceless and very rare.
Ecstasy and positivity like I've never felt before,
radiated and thrived in the air.

My source of happiness, they were.
Countless times the words of love escaped our lips.
How could I ever express my feelings that had no end?
How could I ever show my gratitude when I don't know where to begin?

My inspiration, my happiness, and my driving force.
My universe, my breath and my life.
My magnificent brothers, 
the only two human beings that ever really mattered.
You evoke in me that which is not possible.
The ultimate euphoria that lives in heaven and heaven only.

Author's Note

This is dedicated to my awesome brothers, although I have not shown it to them.
I love you both infinity times infinity..

PS. This is the first poem I've ever written. I hope you like it!

Reviews

[matrixmark]

There is nothing like a brotherly or sisterly love. To have that special connection or Bond is a special thing to have. You have wrote a really loving poem here which expresses that feeling so perfectly.

This this perfect - wouldn't change a thing which thei great piece.

Mark.

[Red Rose]

Thanks a lot! I'm satisfied now.. :)

[matrixmark]

Welcome.

Mark.

[Tazeen Ahmed]

An amazing piece of art... Creativity flows in through your poem
It's quite intense, well written!
Way to keep writing buddy!

[Red Rose]

Thanx Tazeen! It really makes me happy. ^-^

[Lord of mad men]

This is very good and shows a large amount of raw emotion. This is a very sweet poem for your brothers. I have six brothers and two sisters they always have my back and I always have theirs. I would do anything from my sisters. This is nicely worded and written. It is very good for a first time poem. It is far better then my first poems. Keep up the great work. Yours truely a mad lord

[Red Rose]

Haha okay crazy lord! Thanx! I appreciate it.
And wow 8 siblings 0.o .. Awesome!

[Donyay Thomas]

awww this is so sweet, i like how you wrote this for your brothers

[Red Rose]

Hehe thanx! ^-^