Would You Read This?

Help, just wrote a long wip for a novel i am finishing and was wondering if any of you would ever want to read it, thanks.

This is a long wip I came up with;

  When Wesley lands Sam in trouble- the first night at her new school no less- by refusing to lie or tell the truth, it just confirms her fears that Edwin Academy for prestigious pretentious snobs and such is exactly as her made up title suggests. She has enough problems beating 300 other teenagers with the same intentions as her; to win one of the four remaining positions that equal freedom.  To be honest though, it wasn’t Wesley’s fault that he saw the bone of his arm snapping back into place like it wasn’t broken just a few seconds ago. Really. What Sam and Wesley eventually realise is that they have more in common than a love for programming and a uniform. Then the fun really starts.

My three main characters are;

Samantha Winters: Estranged from her father and haunted by the memory of her martyr mother, Sam’s closest family is her older half-sister who has decided to send Sam away to a prestigious boarding school in another province. She soon battles with the will to survive by any means necessary and cost of having blood on her hands.

Wesley Black: The poster boy for ‘how can someone who seems to have it all have nothing at all’. His twin sister went missing eight months before and he was/is the main suspect. Wesley seeks disconnection from the world which he finds through swimming and running a pseudo hacking group.

The Driver Institute: The antagonist in the novel. The institute’s aim is to cultivate the perfect human weapon. But nothing is that simple.

Author's Note

thanks fortaking the time to read, would really appreciate reviews.

Reviews

[Caleb Robinson]

Seems interesting, but it seems to jump from past tense to present, I was confused. The plot sounds interesting, but I didn't understand why the person's arm was broken and such. And programming at a snob school? Good potential, but a little confusing as to where this book might be going

[Marie]

This is good opening. But I don't know if anybody has time to read novels. If you post one, I will try.