seemingly permanent, distantly vulnerable

seemingly permanent, distantly vulnerable

A Chapter by Shy Joe

lines drawn in sand miles from the ocean waves 

will wash away with time


© 2022 Shy Joe


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Wonderfully composed, Joe! Indeed, nothing remains permanent, and with time, even the happiest memories fade.
Mk.t.g

Posted 1 Year Ago


Not everything can be permanent. Even scars fade over time. I like this. It's rich with meaning and so simple.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

but at least they were there...sometimes we need to relent, compromise...

but sometimes we need to make a stand, even if eventually we may get knocked down.
j.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Shy Joe

1 Year Ago

Believe you're right. Sometimes it just gets hard to keep standing. Thank you Jacob.

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