Bleeding Rainbow

Operational emotions

Broken thoughts

Mechanized machine missing all the right parts

Dysfunctional mechanics

Tearing me apart

 

Just a hollow robot

Wanting to surf the colorful rainbow

Too heavy for the hues

 

Just swimming in the blues

Reviews

[Mk.t.g]

"Just a hollow robot
Wanting to surf the colorful rainbow
Too heavy for the hues"
Amazing poem, Joe! You surely have a commendable talent for writing masterpieces.
Mk.t.g

[Red Brick Keshner]

Unexpected pleasure and cadence! This poem certainly command the pace of the reader's reading. That is an amazing feature. Plus, the contrasting images are surely stimulating for both the thinking and imagination. Thanks for sharing. Frederick.