I was the fish that day

your lighthouse glint

flushes my skin

as we sail to each other

catching each other

until your sea spray fragrance 

washes over my ship

sinking me into your eyes

vanished in your incessant ocean

Author's Note

Work in progress. Any suggestions are welcome.

Reviews

[andrew mitchell]

Not bad Shy Joe not bad at all. I like the idea of an ocean metaphor for love.

[Shy Joe]

Thank you Andrew