Time

I found a birthing

in your eyes

gestation of soul

a quenched smile

going on,

              mile

                     after

                            mile

mapped with your heart

for every inch, I will chart

till time,

             tears

                     us

                         apart

Mourning your death

longing your gaze

setting sail

to leave this haze

to not feel your breath

is a crime

for we are only separated

by time

soon, I'll reach heaven

and hold you in my arms,

forever

in time

Reviews

[Papaya]

This is a beautifully written poem. I found the opening so strong and it felt nice to read about such strong feelings and then the tragic turn took all of that away, replaced with sadness but also a spark of hope to meet again. Somewhere else where time doesn't matter. A beautiful poem.

[Shy Joe]

Ana, you have made my day. Your words are always such a warmth. I hope all is well. I can't imagine anything less for you than the best. We don't deserve such luxuries.

Thank you for the kind words.

[Papaya]

You are welcome, I enjoyed your poem. All is well, never better in fact. Thank you Joe :)

[Onlyme]

Aw, this is so beyond human words of beautiful, it really does kiss your soul.