Circle Jerk

Circle Jerk

A Chapter by Shy Joe

i escape your words
a journey, tangently
quadrant to quadrant

but gravitational pull
brings be to circumferenctly
centrifuge your story

the radius of emotions
pull me in


© 2021 Shy Joe


Author's Note

Shy Joe
Haha! See what I did there? Edumacation of fizics/gomotree made poem thing.

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The mystery and power of our circles of influence. Reminds me of famous literary villains that everyone loves to hate or even their infamy, Stockholm syndrome, and toxic co-dependency. Much enjoyed as the notion of personal gravitation is quite superbly interesting.

Posted 2 Years Ago


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The mystery and power of our circles of influence. Reminds me of famous literary villains that everyone loves to hate or even their infamy, Stockholm syndrome, and toxic co-dependency. Much enjoyed as the notion of personal gravitation is quite superbly interesting.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Clever. It took me a second because I'm a natural grammar Nazi. This is good writing I do thinks.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Yes you cannot resist , just getting in. Quiet truthful poem. What i see here is duality of personality. Don't get involved but there is something what catch up your mind. So you go and you don't know why. Very clever all is perfect here.

Posted 6 Years Ago


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omg, how can i take this most excellent poem seriously with an author note like that!! :)
so good.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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it's like...well, we try not to get pulled in by a person, let our emotions escape---keep them in check...but feelings just happen...not much we can do to keep from being "encircled"---

Posted 7 Years Ago


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