I seen you, before you did

I had way to much fun making this!

Droopy bent over lightless candle
Homeless looking rag tag scoundrel
Stole my heart you dirty vandal

Swept the rug right from under my feet
I put my arm around you and burn of your heat
God, staring into your eyes makes me so complete

Smile

You're beautiful

I have to raise my ninja gear up
Competition got me on cleanup
You don't even need that s****y a*s makeup
Leading me around like some new born pup

Whimsical vixen curvy booty mind boggling tasteful pleasure
God threw you from heaven to stay with me forever?
You know naughty or nice the after life lost its treasure
Became a mathematical genius to gauge you in cubic measure
Weather pressure in the desert couldn't rain down life any better

Than you can

Putting all cheesiness aside
I would have to be stupidly blind
Not to truly call you mine
Now give me a kiss, while I slowly close these blinds....

Author's Note

Well, this is the most cheesy I can get!

Reviews

[GypsyMoonCat]

Cheesy pleasy japanesy. This is cute, well done, and even though the flow was a bit jarred here and there with uneven meter, its enjoyment factor was not affected in the negative and I enjoyed it. The poem that is, not the enjoyment factor. Or maybe the enjoyment factor too, but mainly the poem.

? lol

[Writergurl]

This is a very beautiful write and sweet, nicely written. enjoyed the read

[Dennis N. K]

whimsical vixen curvy booty... I love this writing, touching my heart from the inner side.

[s]

This is good! I like the specificity.

[APOORVA]

very sweet and simple.
And simple is always beautiful

[B]

That is so sweet
Very honest and straight to it

Why can't men be that forward ;)

[Anjali]

Yeah, that was too cheesy ... I like the unique way you choose to describe your emotions through this poem.

[Papaya]

Dude, this was awesome. I loved it!!!!!

[CarolinWriter]

If this is the most cheesy you can get I love it!

[ManasaC]

I love how the poem makes clear that the poet is in love with the girl for who she is and not the makeup and all. A quirky one and as Stanley R. suggests it is like a song. Good Job!