What does this mean? I want to take it literally as a game of hide and seek, though I'm ambivalent whether it has a deeper meaning to it. Let me know because I would really like to understand.
I really like the rhyme scheme you have in this poem or "chapter", because I have trouble making piece in which the rhyme is kept all the way.
Posted 7 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
7 Years Ago
This piece is about my search for happiness Joshua. Sometimes finding what makes a person happy is .. read moreThis piece is about my search for happiness Joshua. Sometimes finding what makes a person happy is hard to find. It is elusive. Much like trying to find someone during a game of hide a seek.
So I turned the pain of my search for happiness into a child's game. After I did that I added a rhyming scheme to it to make it more enjoyable to read.
Practice, practice, practice. Read lots of others work too. You will get the hang of it. Thanks for the review.
7 Years Ago
Oh, everything makes sense now. That's why you talk about alcohol and pills... which points to addic.. read moreOh, everything makes sense now. That's why you talk about alcohol and pills... which points to addiction (that could be happiness in way). Yeah, well done Shy Joe.
I am going to read a bit more, and if you have the time, check out my other works. I know I will be putting much more.
What does this mean? I want to take it literally as a game of hide and seek, though I'm ambivalent whether it has a deeper meaning to it. Let me know because I would really like to understand.
I really like the rhyme scheme you have in this poem or "chapter", because I have trouble making piece in which the rhyme is kept all the way.
Posted 7 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
7 Years Ago
This piece is about my search for happiness Joshua. Sometimes finding what makes a person happy is .. read moreThis piece is about my search for happiness Joshua. Sometimes finding what makes a person happy is hard to find. It is elusive. Much like trying to find someone during a game of hide a seek.
So I turned the pain of my search for happiness into a child's game. After I did that I added a rhyming scheme to it to make it more enjoyable to read.
Practice, practice, practice. Read lots of others work too. You will get the hang of it. Thanks for the review.
7 Years Ago
Oh, everything makes sense now. That's why you talk about alcohol and pills... which points to addic.. read moreOh, everything makes sense now. That's why you talk about alcohol and pills... which points to addiction (that could be happiness in way). Yeah, well done Shy Joe.
I am going to read a bit more, and if you have the time, check out my other works. I know I will be putting much more.