Balance

Balance

A Poem by Shy Joe

Emotion: Where would you be without
         me?
Logic:          Needless things, need not be.

Emotion: What would you accomplish
         without passion?
Logic:          Intellect needs no such thing to react,
                    and take action.

Emotion: Fun, excitement, love, and
         hate
Are these not what drive
         you?
Logic:          Math, and science are what I dictate.
                    ....but why do I formulate such mindful
                    views?

Logic:          Repetitious  analogizes correlate our
                    relationship.  Never should we
                    separate.
Emotion: Without you, I would have no
         goals. I need you also, I
         suppose.

Logic:           Our quarrel is solved.  Now what do we do?
Emotion:  I am drained.  I bid you adieu!

© 2018 Shy Joe


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very creative and introspective. one argument i would not want to be in the midst of although we all wrestle with it. not so easy to strike a balance - one usually tips the scale at any given time depending on what has happened and which is stronger so they battle it out 'til one wins out. good stuff ... :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


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Emotion bows to logic. mmm.... on to something there!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

An amusing write. We need both emotion and logic in our lives. Getting the right balance can be tricky sometimes, but if we try to stifle emotion we find ourselves leading a very dull life! I enjoyed the read.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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LJW
The conflict is real between logic and emotion.
Brain/heart.
Loved the form. Unique.
Very cool how you used a lighter, smaller font for " Emotion"...logic always seems to be much louder and more sure of itself while emotion is quieter and unsure.

Posted 3 Years Ago


everything is a battle, this is so very intriguing and so well said

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very creative and introspective. one argument i would not want to be in the midst of although we all wrestle with it. not so easy to strike a balance - one usually tips the scale at any given time depending on what has happened and which is stronger so they battle it out 'til one wins out. good stuff ... :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i choose "emotion" thank you very much, and would like a second helping...
Logic might solve problems...but emotion pushes the pen...
i like the way you presented this...
the dialogue between the two.
effective.
j.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Heart and mind in conflict here. I smiled as I read your lines. It all needs to be a matter of balance. Sometimes my mind gets the upper hand, and when that happens I can and have lost out in relationships. That's where your lines took me. I enjoyed the read. Thanks.

Chris

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The struggle between heart and mind is constant and exhausting. :)
But you need to consider both to make sound and ethical decisions.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

and so a union of the two :)
E.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lol! It's always a battle isn't it ? I think I've heard this in my own head at rimes.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on September 22, 2016
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