Of everything I have written, I am most proud of this one. I don't know why. I rode my bike through the fog, on a road thick with trees. The way the colors popped out through the grey fog was astonishing. Just trying the capture the moment. Felt like I was in a fishbowl and at some point, would hit the glass.
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I really like this. The title is completely misleading, but after reading your author's note I understand.... and actually I think it's kind of cool.. it's not what you expect. I am not sure that's a negative thing, in this case.
You did well. I am a fan of this also. :)
nothing like Fall...and the colors, and the quiet ride on a bicycle...no motor, no mechanics, no noise pollution, just that blanket of fog and being lost in the painting of fall...
nicely done, Shy Joe...
last line...should be "nature's"
but wow...the road in the picture reminds me of Vermont in the autumn time.
Posted 8 Years Ago
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8 Years Ago
Thank you. Grammar and I have never got along. Vermont sounds like a beautiful state.