Insomnia

sand slipping through my fingers

                               trickling

                                           away

the more I grab the faster it disappears
there is so much of it
all around
I just want a little of it
close my eyes, bring me that peace
not tonight
the sands remain transient

Reviews

[Karmee]

such one relatable write, enjoyed

[Papaya]

always within grasp, but hard to grab hold of sometimes... good one joe

[Anna White]

This is relatable as well as clever. Short, great read!