Sun Flower

This poem is about happiness. Don't forget to smile, happiness is a strength, that we all need in dark times.

Waking up in the early morning

With a giant smile upon my face

This time it feels good and finally

I have found a song that I can sing

A beautiful melody in my ears

This day I can feel it, oh yes

Not anymore surrounded by fears

But I can only feel the happiness 

No worries and darkness for today

Cause I can feel a lot of power

When I walk down the highway

I can find a beautiful golden flower

With his leaves oh so pure

They are dancing 

On the rhythm of my beautiful song

And I'm singing like nothing is wrong

Author's Note

Any review is welcome.

Reviews

[SmittyJas]

This flower of the garden type poetry make my heart shine like the sunflower in the sunshine before the rains This poem had energy it has power. I love poems about God's natural flowers.

[Ruth]

Lovely...energetic and felt...made me smile :) x

[Einstein Noodle]

I THINK THE LAST TWO LINES WRAP IT ALL UP ... oops :} caps lock mistake :)) i have a couple offers .. if i may?? (When I walk down this highway) and (I find the golden flower) ... your poem reminds me of a piece of highway between me and Sturgis SD that erupts in sunflowers on both sides... truly you achieve your expression of happiness .. and i absolutely agree these are dark times... there is a powerful hook in your first verse thinks i...
write on
E.

[Saddam]

Waking up in the early morning
With a giant smile upon my face
This time it feels good and finally
I have found a song that I can sing
every day is a new day dear friend.

[Saddam]

Waking up in the early morning
With a giant smile upon my face
This time it feels good and finally
I have found a song that I can sing
every day is a new day dear friend.

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i feel great light of happynes and hope. it s realy make me happy this piece of your creativity . i wish everybody have morning like this. thank you

[gabrielle]

The vivid color of the sunflower, to me, is the best symbol of happiness. The title is very fitting to the idea conveyed in this piece. very well-penned.

[Praveeta]

Your poem radiates happiness. Thanks for sharing.

[Penny]

Very positive poem & has an interesting rhyming scheme. The picture it presents is beatifyul. Well done.

[PoetryPenPal]

That was beautiful. It made me feel happy just reading the first line. Thank you for this beautiful poem.