My Christmas Wish

Dear Santa....

My Christmas wish:

To stop the wars and fights

And that we accept each other

I wish that these Christmas nights

No one has to bother

I wish that all the little girls and boys

Can play with their funny toys

That everyone with a smile can say:

'Dear Santa... we don't fight today'

Author's Note

I like to read you thoughts about this poem (:

Reviews

[SmittyJas]

Nice Christmas wish if only the world would listen to what you say.

[Flutterby aish]

Another sweet one of yours! I like your poems n this one has a great message!Keep it up!

[Praveeta]

A lovely poem with a lovely message this festive season.

[Richa Verma]

great msg in simple words!
liked it a lot :)

[☾Panda☽]

Thank you ((:

[Penny]

Very cute poem giving a msg. Well done..

[☾Panda☽]

Thank you (:

[Penny]

Ur welcum.

[Einstein Noodle]

i like this
i like this a lot!
i like its simplicity
it is childlike and poignant
with depth and wondrous sentiment
E.

[☾Panda☽]

thanks E. ;)

[Ruth]

Yes...a worth while letter, I would say x

[☾Panda☽]

thanks a lot x

[PoetryPenPal]

I love that you wrote about a wish to end a problem that all sufffer from. I enjoyed this poem very much!

[☾Panda☽]

thanks mate hehe ;)

[gabrielle]

A wish becomes more meaningful when it's intended not only for oneself but also for others. I like the child-like approach on this poem, i could immediately feel the sincerity of words. nicely penned, panda.

[☾Panda☽]

Thanks a lot!

[Rose Diamond]

Such a sweet, optimistic poem! I love it, especially those last two lines "That everyone with a smile can say: 'Dear Santa... We don't fight today'" Just so lovely! :)

[☾Panda☽]

Thanks a bunch