Tears

Tears

A Poem by Shubham's View
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There are so many things that tears can express, love, distress, pain, what not!

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Tears
(This was born out of a desire to find the one thing common to all humans.)

Tears are, but warm water,
A result of a few reactions, people say

However miniscule the reactants maybe
The resultants, strong concoctions, unfazed.

Frozen between time and space
These droplets weigh so much
These tears, preserved, memories encase
Their significance varies as much

They speak of joy,
Of untold pain and sorrow
The loss of another, dear to our hearts
The gain of someone new.

Look my friends, look around
These things, common to all
Of common brotherhood, of lonesomeness
Of existence, so dreary.

So much tears, a melting pot
A sea of the unspoken
Shed away from the sight of the world
In a corner, dark and desolate.

The flamboyant exterior, may mean not much
If one feels their pillow at night
Into the feathers they cry and cry
Till sleep overcomes, tears in dry patches

Of these tears one stands alone
The tears of a mother
Tears of labour, tears of birth
Tears of joy counting those little fingers

These tears we shed, li'l blobs of water
Tracing the contours of our cheeks
Oh! So deep! They fall so deep!
In a well filled with quarters.

© 2012 Shubham's View


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Beautiful write enhanced by the font too deep in a well filled with quarters . Great imagery

Posted 12 Years Ago


Shubham's View

12 Years Ago

Thank you MOON. Imagery is the best tool!
This is great! Tears are very interesting...but they're very good for us :) Wonderful poem. Beautiful :) thanks for sharing.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Shubham's View

12 Years Ago

Thank you for reading it Felicia!
I'm glad that you liked it!
Felecia

12 Years Ago

You're welcome :)
Such charming description!!
I especially loved the seventh stanza, how true!!!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Shubham's View

12 Years Ago

Thank you so much, Anxia! I find solace in the fact that people like it!
Love it! So beautiful and well-written! :) 100/100

Posted 12 Years Ago


Shubham's View

12 Years Ago

Thank you so much, Invisible Girl!
The Invisible Girl

12 Years Ago

your welcome ^-^
Tears are good for us. They mean we are alive and still can feel. I like the description and the emotion in our word. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


Shubham's View

12 Years Ago

Thank you sir, for reviewing it!
Emotions ,spell, spell tracks,through spirit,soul,man and his rib,even to depth of bone or to the quick of marrow,your tears swell,well,trace emotion's spell.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Shubham's View

12 Years Ago

And therein was found that verse that moved people! Nice!
Beautiful and ever so true!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Shubham's View

12 Years Ago

Thank you Acroplix, (which I suspect is your pen name). Maybe you would also consider reading the ot.. read more

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Added on October 4, 2012
Last Updated on October 4, 2012

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Shubham's View
Shubham's View

Bangalore, India



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