There are so many things that tears can express, love, distress, pain, what not!
Tears (This
was born out of a desire to find the one thing common to all
humans.)
Tears
are, but warm water, A result of a few reactions, people say
However
miniscule the reactants maybe The resultants, strong concoctions,
unfazed.
Frozen between time and space These droplets weigh
so much These tears, preserved, memories encase Their
significance varies as much
They speak of joy, Of untold
pain and sorrow The loss of another, dear to our hearts The
gain of someone new.
Look my friends, look around These
things, common to all Of common brotherhood, of lonesomeness Of
existence, so dreary.
So much tears, a melting pot A sea of
the unspoken Shed away from the sight of the world In a corner,
dark and desolate.
The flamboyant exterior, may mean not
much If one feels their pillow at night Into the feathers they
cry and cry Till sleep overcomes, tears in dry patches
Of
these tears one stands alone The tears of a mother Tears of
labour, tears of birth Tears of joy counting those little
fingers
These tears we shed, li'l blobs of water Tracing
the contours of our cheeks Oh! So deep! They fall so deep! In a
well filled with quarters.
Tears are good for us. They mean we are alive and still can feel. I like the description and the emotion in our word. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote
Emotions ,spell, spell tracks,through spirit,soul,man and his rib,even to depth of bone or to the quick of marrow,your tears swell,well,trace emotion's spell.
Posted 12 Years Ago
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12 Years Ago
And therein was found that verse that moved people! Nice!
Thank you Acroplix, (which I suspect is your pen name). Maybe you would also consider reading the ot.. read moreThank you Acroplix, (which I suspect is your pen name). Maybe you would also consider reading the others!