Slow Down!

Everyone who's in a hurry should try to have some time off. Inspired by Pablo Neruida.

SLOW DOWN

Ahoy! There mate!

You seem to make a lot of haste

It may seem just a play of fate

Do not let it all go to waste!

Run Just Run

The world is full of fun

Of which you know none

Do indulge in humor and pun!

You are afraid of scorn

And perceive it as a thorn

You get up every single morn

Worry,hurry and forget your bowl of corn!

Its time to stop thee

With delight and glee

Look back at the huge tree

And learn to fly like the birds who are free!

Vacation and rest

Bring you to the zenith of your quest

The world's a big wild fest

Lest you believe the rest is a test

But trust me, it's only for the best

Once in a while you've got to slow down

Completely remove the crease and the frown

Wear a big shiny smile like a golden crown

and never again will you look back down!

Shubham Chattopadhyay

Reviews

[Violet Dreams...]

Reading your poem was fun.
The rhyme in your poem worked well.
A delightful write.

[Shubham's View]

This is my oldest and hence my most nutty write! Thank you though!!
Do consider reviewing the others!

[Violet Dreams...]

Will do. it was a delight to read you

[S]

love it :D

[Shubham's View]

Thank you, Silverlight. It is funny from how many places inspiration can be derived.