My First Love...........

Guys, we all have that one first love. On these valentine lets again fall in love with it.

   My First Love

As usual, I was going to school.

But something unusual came ahead of me and 

sweetly asked me "Where is the class 10th?"

I just look and look at her till she went behind the wall.

Then I stop my heart,

which was banging my chest like a door.

At last, it said to me "Is this your first love?"

MY FIRST LOVE of course, 

she is  My First Love, MY FIRST LOVE.

I never saw such beauty,

till I saw you.

I never heard the singing of birds,

till I heard you.

I never wish anything to God, 

till I met you!

Because you are my first love

my true love, My first love.

At night I make huge promises to myself,

 just like 'Tommorrow I will propose her',

Seeing to mirror I practice it thousands of times'

But seeing you I just close my eyes. 

Did you see me, see me ever SEE ME, See Me.

I have lost focus and something like concentration and 

Friends and Family just because you are my first love, 

First true love, true love.

OH! One day she came and said to me 

"Will You Be My VALENTINE?", And I said to her

that............

                                                                              -Shubham.T 

Author's Note

Let me know about your feeling towards your first love.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Our first love. We shall never forget. A wonderful poem shared my friend.
Coyote

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

gorgeous, exquisite memories of childhood high school first crushes etc, loved this, thankyou for entry into my competition, good luck and thankyou

[Onlyme]

Truly love poem of first love expressed to perfection. Made you feel the goosebumps on your skin. And the mad grin on your face.

[Abdulfaraj Suheila]

the suspense is good. it is lovely

[ShubhamT]

Thanks Bro!

[Mihika_d]

Lovely poem Shubham! Expressed your feelings well. Do you mind me correcting some grammatical errors?

[ShubhamT]

Not at all Mihika. In fact I would be very grateful to you.

[Chris Shaw]

Lovely romantic thoughts about first love. Mine was the boy who sat next to me in class. He marked my papers up in maths tests and I danced with him when we had country dancing classes in school. A sweet arrangement that suited us both at the age of 12.

Chris

[ShubhamT]

Yeah, indeed first love is very special.