Song of the Asylum (Lyrics)

Song of the Asylum (Lyrics)

A Poem by ShrinkingElvira
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Lyrical rendition of one Psychiatrist’s views on our mental health system. Link to audio version at the beginning.

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[Intro]
“If my pictures are displeasing, do remember�"that my subjects have to offer�"No pious, or civilized, or redemptive features.”
[Solo]
[Verse 1]
Hills waking from slumber. 
�"Halls with mission in their plies. 
Great, showy castles, born of zeal,�"�
Forged with dignity, contrived. 
Voices crying “Welfare!”�"and
Starving imbecility…
�"But walls built out of mercy�"
hold no merciful relief!
[Pre-Chorus]
And history’s song is mournful, 
if prescient is the mind!�"�
[Chorus]
Unravel, the stillness
Let clarity, emerge.
Unkindness must not prosper.
Nor haunt, the other’s urge. 
�"If keening, is the past:
“humanity here-vied!”
[Hook]
build, the roads of answer,
�"where dignity can't die!
[Solo]
[Verse 2]
The master of all progress, 
is who measures, all it twines.
�"Who tastes the cures, 
for like-infirmed�"
where fathered, to confine.
Ignoble is the quest�"
Forgotten motive, 
means yet stayed.
Imperfect, see its nature, when
�"The Healing Art displayed!�"�
[Pre-Chorus]
Mean’s ending is not human,
�"when love dies along the way!
[Chorus]
Unravel, the stillness.
Let clarity, emerge.
Unkindness must not prosper.
Nor haunt, the other’s urge. 
�"Where echoes out, the past:
“Humanity should guide!”
[Hook]
build your road of answers
�"where dignity resides!
[Solo]
[Verse 3] 
Can three generations, 
crown one fit to cut their line?
�"No vicious principle, proclaimed.
No harm was here designed.
�"Where broken will, by perfect time�"
Clockwork & Steam alone!
�"But silent rules still govern�"
Where mercy’s voice is gone!
[Pre-Chorus]
The clockwork cures�"save but a husk,
…from which no future grows!
[Chorus]
Unravel, the stillness.
Let clarity, emerge.
Unkindness must not prosper.
Nor haunt, the other’s urge. 
�"To whisper, from their past:
“Humanity survives!”…
[Hook]
Grown children�"build your answers�"
where dignity comes alive!
[Outro]
Lessons, hewn by time.
Of good works, by men.
Always fettered should be: caution�"�
�"To hearts that walk in halls�"
Where love was overdue.
[Outro]
�"No escape from�"
�"Man’s good deeds�"
�"When love is not paid�"
�"At its due.

© 2024 ShrinkingElvira


Author's Note

ShrinkingElvira
Three months to write, after 3 years of research. How many direct references and quotes can you recognize?

Audio version here: https://youtu.be/RmMocLsqM3Q?si=SQafZfSRYDIT2wW4

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