Eternal

Its about feeling of acceptance in one-sided love.This poem 'Eternal' exclaims about purity and sufferings in one sided love.

"ETERNAL "

It's one-sided ,
And I know it always would be
I will never be your that beloved,
But that's not the reason to stop for me.

It's enough you know everything,
It's enough we're still talking,
It's enough we're always just friends,
And this is how my expectations from you end.

I know you don't even care what I feel
Meeting all your shades ,I love you still.
Your someone special, any girl it can be
I've no chance, but trust me it doesn't bother me.

Yes with my broken heart I can pretend it to be fine.
'Cause in my dreams, you're always just mine.
Scared to share those all fantasies with you I make,
Us and that sight pleases me ,even though its fake.

See how perfect my world is having you in my silly
delusions,
I've completed that incomplete something, you and
me in my imagination.
Never sympathize, do not regret for breaking my
heart ,
Loving you was my choice, can't blame you for this
fault.

Who cares of the constellations,
When you're the moon to light up my night.
Not scared of the darkness if you leave even,
'Cause your existence is that sunshine that makes
my mornings bright.

Alas ! You're unaware how often I think of you
I find my pleasures in your thaughts, isn't it enough
though …
I know for thou ,this all doesn't make any sense
Perhaps, I enjoy the every wound of loving you in silence.

Nor even your presence ,neither your affection
My selfless holy love doesn't need anything in return.
Even though one-sided, but still will last forever
Because till infinity, My Love For You Is Eternal.

Reviews

[Poetic_Vixen]

Isn't it just so enough for us lovers sometimes to just stay in love with them, somehow being alone in love is satiating though it's sad, this rendered my heart, fellow poet, you have evocatively spoken of how a heart truly in love compromises with their feelings for the one they love, mostly for their sake, it signifies how big a heart can be, loving your arduous stanzas singing of love, very beautifully written!

[Poetic_Vixen]

Isn't it just so enough for us lovers sometimes to just stay in love with them, somehow being alone in love is satiating though it's sad, this rendered my heart, fellow poet, you have evocatively spoken of how a heart truly in love compromises with their feelings for the one they love, mostly for their sake, it signifies how big a heart can be, loving your arduous stanzas singing of love, very beautifully written!

[Shreya]

@Poetic_Vixen
Thank you so much for your thoughtful review! Your words about the poem's message of love and compromise truly resonate with me. I'm so glad you enjoyed the stanzas.

[Poetic_Vixen]

I'm very happy to know this! You're very welcome fellow poet!

[FlaLover]

interesting
if only we all had someone feel like this about us

[Shreya]

@FlaLover
Thanks! It's a feeling I hope everyone gets to experience someday

[Andra Davis]

Nicely written. But don’t idolize someone to that extent. I'm worried about you. But nicely written.

[Shreya]

@Andra Davis
Thank you for your review.
It's what unrequited love feels like.

[Harshita]

You are a very good writer and you always write like this. You become a very good writer in one day. I am very proud of you. Your poem has expressed your feelings very well. For me this poem is 100/100,

[Shreya]

@Harshita
Thank you