DREAM

the poem is about a girl who lives in her own world of fantasy. she gets disturbed when called back to the real world. she thinks and believes that the world she lives in is the perfect one.

She was elegant, the kind you rarely see

was is a gown or a divine covering?

she was smiling when her veil half flew

ah!that accelerated my heart to infinity.

i got up from the bed, into the world of trees

not near the oak nor behind the pine

could i grasp that angel on earth.

little did she know , all i wanted was her secret.

there's a breeze and my soul awakes.

she's there in her white gown floating in the soil.

that beauty gave life to the yellow leaves

can she fulfill my dream of being as beautiful as her?

she comes more close, closer than i imagine

her moves caress my face like petals

and then it hurt, for i was down

it was a dream! a dream like no other.

Author's Note

waiting for comments and suggestions. an aspiring poet so need to know your point of views

Reviews

[Paavana Varma]

Such a beautiful imagery. I loved your choice of words too,it makes the reader want to read even further!
Thank you for sharing!

[Shreeraksha Naik]

Thank you so much. It means a lot.

[Paavana Varma]

My pleasure.