Loose

Easy guilt
overtakes me and
all of the faces
erase me and
I slip in a well
rapturously.
After a few brews
and a wet vagina
my nerves shake loose
again.
I'm an adolescent
with contradicting condescension.
I love you
I look you in the eye to tell you
we look away
we don't say much.
Arguably agreeably
disagreeably so.
Every instant is a building.

Reviews

[Bare trees]

It seems to me this is about someone who is caught in the flow of freedom but also looking for herself, who she is and what she wants. At the same time, the one she's with may have somewhat the same feelings to some degree.

Every instant is a building. Hmm, I don't take this to mean a real building but more of a building up of discovery about who they are.

I'm probably wrong but it was fun to think about. Good one.