The waters fine

The waters fine

A Story by But?shouldyouneedus?

If you were a river,
I would drown myself in you.
Jump head first into the rapids,
Taking on the darkness in your head.
Find the deepest depth
And let myself be completely submerged in you.
Just to get in a feel the fast paced current
Feel the cold
Let myself float maybe
Float somewhere in between your dreams and thoughts
Let you take me through prettiest and the scariest of the river
But ive been thinking, what if you wash me up?
And some old river bed will shelter what's left of me.
The hypothermic waters can kill
It won't kill me
But I'll just lay there.
Until I decide to jump back in.

© 2017 But?shouldyouneedus?


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The currents of love are powerful but worth the jump as you marvelously state.

Posted 7 Years Ago


'jump head first into the rapids, taking on the darkness in your head.' this is an unconditional love, taking the bad with the good... the best kind.


Posted 7 Years Ago


Let love consume you.bury all doubts.faith is your blanket.it's warm and embracing.go all in

Posted 7 Years Ago



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