4 am

F**k
I'm so mad
I wish I were a good writer
So I could say things about your nose and eyes
And oh god
Your skin
So someone,
Anyone
Would understand how f*****g crazy I'm going
But all I've got is , sometimes I wanna reach over an grab your hand
And sometimes it's 4am on a Tuesday and my heart is beating really fast because I saw your face in a dream again.
And it's f*****g crazy.

Reviews

[sinNsincerity]

I love how real this poem is.
The night terrors...

[Rob Santana]

Straight forward, hahaha...

[inconsistentsea]

I like this quite a bit. So frantic and almost desperate and I can totally relate.

[Sami Khalil]

A good rant and rave...:)..................

[ATCQrepresentrepresent]

I cant say that I didn't wish someone wrote this kind of thing about me. I really enjoyed this. Like really enjoyed this. I immediately recognize the feeling of waking up with a beating heart from a dream containing the one you so badly want to be adored by. Honest, short, and gives us an idea of your thoughts that would otherwise go unnoticed. awesome job :)

[Bare Trees]

When I took out the cursing the emotional impact became more honest. Cursing in this particular poem makes it sound amateurish.
But all I've got is , sometimes I wanna reach over an grab...
Did I miss something after the word is?

Good poem that relates the struggles and excitement one might go through over a crush.