He Said, She SaidA Screenplay by Colton BoseA short script I wrote for a short film about awkward love.1. SUBURBAN KITCHEN " DAYTIME WIDE: Two individuals, a man and a woman, both
young adults, sit on opposite sides of a two person table, albeit neither are
looking at each other; not even directly.
Both are looking down at their own cup of coffee and snack. Both have apathetic looks upon the faces;
both appear as though they wish they were somewhere else. MEDUIM: The man sighs slightly, lifts up his cup of
coffee, and takes a sip. The look of
apathy is still on his face. MEDIUM: The woman fiddles with her cup of coffee,
without picking it up. The look of
apathy is still on her face. CLOSE UP: The man opens his mouth and prepares to
speak, all the while still looking at his coffee and away from the woman. THE MAN THE WOMAN THE MAN THE WOMAN THE MAN THE WOMAN WIDE: There is a long silence. Neither one of them is looking at the other
still; their eyes remain fixed on their own cup of coffee. This shot remains for several long moments. CLOSE UP: The man takes a sip of coffee. Then, he lifts his head up and, for the first
time, looks at the woman. There is still
apathy in his face, but there is also growing sorrow in it as well. THE MAN CLOSE UP: The woman, who clearly hears this, seemingly
blows it off. She makes no gesture,
vocal or physical, towards the man. She
simply sits there, with the same expression upon her face, as she prepares to
speak. THE WOMAN THE MAN END © 2009 Colton BoseAuthor's Note
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1 Review Added on December 24, 2009 Last Updated on December 24, 2009 AuthorColton BoseMentor, OHAboutGood day, folks. My name is Colton Bose. Influences include Walt Whitman, e.e. cummings, William S. Burroughs, T.S. Eliot, among others. I'm more interested in filmmaking than I am writing, tho.. more..Writing
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