My Princess In Her Castle

Once Upon a time
In a Far away land
A princess slumbers,
A dream is planned

Her Hair so Brown
Her Eyes sparkle so
Her Smile Blinding
She’s Gorgeous I Know

Her Tender body rises
Up and Down with Breath
Her Hand clutched red
It will be my death

For she holds at my heart
My mind and my soul
Her innocent slumber
Swallows me whole

I love this princess
This majestic female,
The happy ever after
To my fairy-tale

Reviews

[Arthur Crow]

The whole piece flows and like a river of sweet enchanted nectar� beautifully crafted!
Sincere and rich in imagery.

[chloe cruz]

Wow, this was really pretty; beautiful, I should say. The flow was wonderful... Perfect.

Chloe. (Sorry for the short review, but, I've gotta run. I'll write a new one later, hehe. :])