Hated

Hate building
Can't sleep
Eyes fill
Thoughts Creep

I channel my pain
To burn and bite
Out comes the red
I cannot fight

Falling through time
Hour by hour
Crazy thoughts
The world is sour

Holding us in
Then shoving us out
They give us no time
To scream and shout

Broken mirrors
Shattered glass
Hearts Burnt
Reject in class

Failing at life
You fall and crawl
Legs are sore
Hated by all

Reviews

[Amy]

You send such a strong message and captivate what the protagonist is going through seamlessly.
Nice work. x

[LacyBug]

Wow! This has a very POWERFUL meaning! I really enjoyed reading this. Keep up the good work! cant wait to see what you bring next!

Lacy ;)

[AlucardJenson]

Wow, powerful meaning to it. I really like this, keep up the good work :)