Unseen

Wondering around
Your soul Dying
Waiting to be found
It should be flying

Puddles of blood
Lay on the ground
Your eyes flood
As you linger around

At your school
Peer pressure builds
Your out of fuel
Your secrets are spilled

Your alone
Everyday
Waiting for your tombstone
You hope it is today

Nobody around
To give you hug
Nobody hears a sound
When you fall onto the rug

You slit your throat
With the knife
Your confession you wrote
That said why you ended your life

For this girl
She died at fourteen
Her life in a whirl
She left unseen

Reviews

[LacyBug]

I really enjoyed reading this. Beautifully written and has good flow.
Keep up the good work! Cant wait to see what you write next!!

Lacy

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i can find myself in it

beautifully written

i like these lines:

Nobody around
To give you hug
Nobody hears a sound
When you fall onto the rug

edit 2nd line .. it is 'dying'