full of black holes

 Full of black holes 

Black and so lame

I couldn't find myself in all that chaos

Everything was so dark, and I think I've became blind

My tears were like little rain drops..

Falling from those smoky clouds

No one would realize..

No one would recognize..

The announcement of the pain of the blue sky

I started running to an unknown destination

No sense of direction !

No awake stars to show me where that path has been hidden

I just happened to feel a cool breeze caressing my face 

An overflow crossing my frozen cheeks 

As if my chest has been pounding so badly 

Lost my breath !

I turned around, searching for a breez that could lead me to the light outside

But there was nothing near !

As if everything have been spirited away

Suddenly, I heard a sound of a trickling water 

So I followed my ears to take me over that lough

I approached one step and another from it

In order to see the reflexion of my body and feel alive

But I could not see anything..

Just a gloomy black hole !

I spaced out

Leaving my heart behind !

What if that scary thing would really happen?

I am so worried that darkness Extinguishes off every light in my life 

Afetr all 

That black hole was a part of me

Swallowing everything still alive inside of me

Seems like I am full of black holes !

ain't you wanna save me !?

Reviews

[Black Jess]

I'm coming to save you x°) .
You know , I can see feelings throughout your words , not just in this poem , but in all your writings . You have the ability to bring emotions to life and you inspire me with your master-pieces !
I know the kind of black hole that absorbs everything on its way and the more it absorbs the bigger it become , I hope this is not the kind of black holes you're talking about !!! =(
I have to say , you're getting better and better ! Great Job ^^ ~ fighting ~

[A daytime shooting star]

Thanks jessie !
But actually I meant that kind of black holes 😆😆

[Black Jess]

Oh dear !!! Tell me what's going on ( on fb NOW ! )

[A daytime shooting star]

nothing special at all xD

[Karmee]

Very excellent writing, I enjoyed this a lot.
very expressive and well written

[A daytime shooting star]

Thank you so much
I am so glad reading your comment 😊
And happy that you enjoyed it