To Have Some Tears

It was my pride not to call you
For own sake
But it's now only me for whom
All the prayers I make.

Cause you love me that's why
You have made me weak,
Won't you love then
My tears to take?

Hey You! Why You
Always love to play?
When I need tears
You then take that all away!

What's the gift then
For you I can buy?
Please make a way
Please make me cry

Reviews

[Reeti]

it's a nice lyrical poem. The speaker is making a plea in the edge of breaking into tears. But, the numbness felt by him makes him restive and feel the need for tears by the help of his beloved. It's a very down-to-earth aspect in which people must flow out their emotions (moderately though most of the time). That's an important message being given in your poem, i think.

[Me]

Wonderful poem