Of an empty precious cage

This poem was written and first published as a review of ''A Childhood Lost'' in writers cafe. "A childhood Lost" is written by Amplyyours.

Those dreams, those colors, those faces,

All lost, all wracked in this ''Life'' named maze.

I couldn't trap those days,

In my ''precious'' golden cage.

                                                   - Inspired by a Bangla song of Rabindranath Thakur 

Reviews

[MOON]

Beautiful , thought provoking write.

[K.C. Zbryk]

This is a beautiful poem and its amazing how much can be captured by such brief thoughts. I love the imagry and will need to look at the inspiration piece as well. Very profound poetry!

[Coyote Poetry]

Nice vision create with your words. I agree with your logic. Life can seem like a maze. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Harmonica winds]

Very awesome writing here!

[Groovy]

superb write

[BeccaB]

nice and basic well written ^_^

[TawnyBlueStar]

simple and sweet :D
lovely poem :)

[Tai Ryens]

Simplicity is sometimes the best way to express the emotions that are the hardest to express. Beautiful poem, you did great amazing on this one!

[Gobinder Singh Dhindsa]

Nice! Do u read mine to Anguish...