Silence

Silence

A Poem by Shoeb Karim

When there is nothing to say

There blooms silence

                                       

From the great of earth

                           

For the deep of heart

© 2011 Shoeb Karim


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Nice alliteration and setup of the poem this conveys the beauty of silence that lends itself to mediation rather than loneliness. The use of so few words only adds to the effect of just the still moments that we all need and often waste trying to talk.

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Nice well written poem... Thank you for sharing...

Posted 12 Years Ago


I love the line for the deep of heart. Silence is from where all knowing springs.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Profound truth, exquisitely expressed. Congrats, Shoeb.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Says so much with such few short words. Awesome!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice alliteration and setup of the poem this conveys the beauty of silence that lends itself to mediation rather than loneliness. The use of so few words only adds to the effect of just the still moments that we all need and often waste trying to talk.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

good message in short. with regards.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I so agree with this write! Lovely message.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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So few words, such great meaning. Nicely done.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Such words flow with the power of the deeper thoughts, tied to the very essence of the Earth itself. You have crafted a fine piece of vision and feeling with your ink. Much enjoyed!

Aaron

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Shoeb Karim
Shoeb Karim

Chittagong, Bangladesh



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I am Shoeb Karim. The Arabic word 'Shoeb' means 'tree's little twig' and 'Karim' - it's also Arabic - means 'generous'. 'Generous little twig' sounds sweet, isn't it? Yes I believe a twig is a genero.. more..

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