Midnight Masquerade

 Midnight Masquerade

 

 

 

Every time I smell, my burning ashes

Behind your turning faces

Every minute I feel loneliness

Cause guilt is flowing in my veins

 

Every word you said to me

And every time I hurt you back

Cause a fear is pushing me

To let me back my step|2|

That’s why I back my step|2|

 

Into your glittering eyes

I see my life resides

Cause my soul is bound there

But my heart is cracked

(Keeping back my step)

That’s why I back my step|3|

You can’t go back|3|

 

You are the thirst I want,

You are being made for mine

Look at me back one more time

Look at me back one more time

Oh baby! I’m tired of being ashamed

I know I did it all strange

But I’m begging you now

Don’t let me fade|3|

 

In this Masquerade,

In this Masquerade,

      Midnight Masquerade|3|

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[stars are far]

That was very well done, keep it up

[Shiveon]

well thanqs stars, 4 connecting ..

[stars are far]

my pleasure :)

[Sami Khalil]

A splendid poem and form. Thank you for sharing...:)...............

[Shiveon]

tnqs sami...

[Sami Khalil]

Y A W...:)...........................

[shruthi]

nice work shiveon...!!!
Thanks for sharing

[Shiveon]

well thnqs shruti 4 reviewing...

[shruthi]

anytym shiveon......
keep writing

[Frozen Eyes]

Burning words, the longing, the pleading, the imagery everything so heart touching. good work buddy :)
Keep writing :)

[Shiveon]

thanks Frozen.. your review is much valuable...

[Riley Justine]

An amazing romantic and sad mood to this piece. The flow is very different and original. It flows like a song. I like it!

[Shiveon]

thanq u Raven! i tried to make it more like song than a poem. i hope u will enjoy the upcoming :)

[Duaa]

An INteresting and romantic piece..I like the vibes it gives off somewhat tragic love or you know...

[Shiveon]

thanks Duaa. nd ya its all about broken relationship nd apologies. no matter how hard you try to collect the pieces, they are just pieces...

[sharonlee]

Very interesting form and flow... a melancholy realness to this.

[Shiveon]

thanks sheron...