TRAUMATIC

With pal that passed

Not only

Struggles increased

But my relation to you

has loosened that 

magical essence

Over sentimental I

Each day worries

Each day some mistakes

Some weird perceptions

This mind commits...

We are tied 

in an untitled tie

Super precious it is

Above any perceptions

and words

Bit helpless I am today

But tomorrow will

be beautiful, I believe

Soon these regrets of today

will be hidden in darkness.....

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Strong and good words dear Poet.
" I believe
Soon these regrets of today
will be hidden in darkness...."
A new day give us new hope. Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry.
Coyote

[anne]

thanks CP :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.

[Dayran]

Its quite extraordinary to find that link with something we would never have thought possible. Nice ...

[anne]

thanks dear...:))

[Confuser]

Anne: Interesting, full of details and emotions, truly a wonderful poem, you are creeping up with some powerful hidden emotional bombs, wow. I love it...Traumatic. Wow. worry(ies)
We are tied
in an untitled tie
Super precious it is
Above any perceptions
and words and I can go on. What an amazing writing, Anne, Soon these regrets of today will be hidden in darkness. Amazing!!! Dale

[anne]

thanks dear...all your goodness..I will correct..:))

[Confuser]

Anne: You asked, hope I didn't do wrong. I make mistakes all the time, OMG!!

[Briana O'Connor]

Filled with emotion and very impacting. Love the weaving story entailed here. The lines, themselves, seemed a bit jumbled, but I really enjoyed the read. Nicely penned.

[anne]

thank you Briana...:))

[Sami Khalil]

Traumatic and stressful indeed when we infer the injustices of so many things and refer to them by name. A strong write...:).....

[anne]

actually...thank you Sir..:))

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome muchly...:)....