TRIUMPH

Gruelling path

Tiresome to walk

Eyes sparkle

Soul exhaust...

Forces ahead

Pulls back..

Shatter once

Start again..

Search for hope

Need strength

Light from 

inner self

Always

is your own..

Keep on

Vision never lies

Near is goal,

a little more strive...

Reviews

[Lea Walker]

Interesting way to write a poem. It was very good.

[anne]

thank you so much Lea...:))

[Avinash]

Full of hope and courage. I needed this one at this point of time.

[anne]

best of luck..:))

[Dayran]

The locals here ... have a saying that goes ... ' Sikit sikit ... lama lama ... jadi bukit. ' Translates as ... a little each time ... would someday ... be a mountain. In the old days ... the ladies would carry an onion in their bag. Its for the friction.

[anne]

always love your interpretation..thank you so much...:))

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree dear Poet.
"Keep on
Vision never lies
Near is goal,
a little more strive..."
Must keep going forward and not repeat the same mistakes. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[anne]

Yeah very true..thank you so much CP..:))

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[J. K. Beach]

Anne, this is a great reminder of how we must keep on working towards our goals... rest if we must, but ever strive for the finish line. This is a compact expression of an infinitely valuable lesson. Well done!

[anne]

so nice to read these valuable words..thank you so much JK..:))

[Ana B.]

Nice incentive for those who forget...
Great work :)

[anne]

thank you dear...:))

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

Never give up, happiness or triumph can be just around the corner. Very good, Anne. :) Rudi

[anne]

thank you so much Rudi...:))

[Leviathus Fortes]

Such a positive message to convey.

[anne]

thank you Fortes..:))

[Jamestown]

Nice piece, with a fantastic message! Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[anne]

thank you James..I love your visits....:))