ANGELIC

Penning the words

Crafting into structure

Bringing emotions

Was merely

glee for me..

Now this love

has ascended 

to next level

I have started 

worshiping it

like a deity...

Forces of nature

Never take from me 

this joy of writing

For me, 

now it is divinity.....

Reviews

[Zoe Goldman]

Can I please have your last name for the book you submitted to?

[anne]

????...I am unclear for what you asked...My actual name is Shivedita Singh...:))

[Zoe Goldman]

You submitted to a poetry contest. The prize was being given full credit for the poem in a book.

[anne]

OMG...sorry I forgot...thank you so much....I already mentioned my name...I be be glad to tell if any other information needed...:))

[Arsh]

Here, the word "Angelic" is very close to my heart. Don't know why, may be, cause, it belongs to you. Well, nice flow of ink. I just read this in a flow as well. Sounds good. One of my fav. writes foresure.
... would be looking forward to rolling down ov`r the "Angelic" poetry page soon!

[anne]

thank you so much Arsh...will read yours other too..they are beautiful..nice to have you here...:))

[Arsh]

... been a pleasure to be 'around' your heart.. all the time.

[Dayran]

Its a wonderful feel for the importance of self-expression. Keep it up.

[anne]

thank you so much Dayran...:))

[Prabha Salimath]

So sweet of you Shivedita I just loved it and thank for sharing and saying your wishing to worship it as God.

" Forces of nature
Never take from me
this joy of writing
For me,
now it is divinity..... "
I really liked it dear so beautiful...

[anne]

thank you so much Prabha...its always pleasure to see you...:))

[Prabha Salimath]

Anytime dear..... I like to read your poems too...

[Sanjh]

It's beautiful Shivedita. I thought I've already reviewed this one in your profile but...deja vu may be...:)
Really enjoyed reading it, thanks for sharing...:)

[anne]

thank you so much Sanjh........:))

[NoelHC]

There is something that drives us to write, and we are incomplete without it. Well done, a couple of minor points, as pointed out by KL in her review, but all in all, nice one.

[anne]

oops...I will correct them...thank you so much Noel...:))

[Avinash]

Somebody wise told long back " Dhai Akhar Prem ka ...." ;)

[anne]

thanks Avinash...:))

[Saddam]

A lovely and sweet one dear.................

[anne]

thank you SSAD....:))

[Lyn Anderson]

A lovely poem, over all well stated.
a couple minor things :
to the next level might sound less awkward
And it is divinity would match with the opening stanza in terms of rhythm.

[anne]

thank you KLG...do consider points mentioned..:))

[Ana B.]

ah, such a beautiful and perfect moment one feels when reading it....thanks for sharing A :)

[anne]

thank you so much Ana...:))