UNFOLDING SAGA OF PRIDE

How to unfurl this story of pride?

Glory is whacking, how to embed it in my lines...

Here essence of soil brings jiffies of happiness

That tales of chronicle fills heart with pride...

The aegis of father is from Himalayas

The warmth of mother affection is from Ganges 

Sublime beauty of Hindi suffuse on my heart

Crops are singing the tale of progress apart

At every step the colors changes

Tradition and culture fragrance amazes

Rapport among folks sings songs of love

Colors of Holi, lights of Diwali always bring trust...

Architect of history leaves impression on heart

The lesson of values we have learnt from start

Where guest is given god designation

Mahatma, Bheem, Azad, you are proud of nation...

Tricolor incite the spark in our mind

Jan Gan Man, my favorite rhyme..

Fortunate are we, you made us your part...

Bless my people, my nation, my lord

Let our every step is of conviviality for all.....

                                                     

                              

Reviews

[Matching Socks]

Beautiful my dear. I enjoyed the journey. :)

[anne]

thank you so much Ance....love to see you.. :))

[Cory Barrett]

Through such beautiful word you where able to convey color. The hues of passion, and love. Rich shade of introspect.

[anne]

thank you so much Cory... :)

[Sami Khalil]

National and cultural pride. A splendid poem of affirmation...Bravo.........................

[anne]

OMG....thank you so much Sir.... :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome muchly...:).........................

[yuki]

very well done anne :) words cant describe how a wonderful piece this is :)

[anne]

thank you so much dear... :)

[yuki]

your welcome anne :)

[Eve Ola]

Brilliant job Anne and definitely a great tribute

[anne]

thank you so much Eve... :)

[Frieda P]

This is brilliant anne, what a wonderful tribute, so artfully written, last stanza is my favorite....and I learned something too! :)

[anne]

Oh..Frieda, I feel so blessed to hear from you all this....thank you so very much.... :))

[Frieda P]

Was my pleasure, I love the bright graphics too, a man that owns a store I frequent speaks to me of India, so I know a bit of your celebration, enjoy!

[Tom]

A wonderfully expressive patriotic tribute of your culture and country !

[anne]

thank you so much Tom... :))

[Avinash]

It is one beautiful poem on the eve of independence day.

[anne]

thank you so much Avinash.... :))

[Prabha Salimath]

India is place that can be explain vividly that I see here...

[anne]

yaa..Prabha...very true...thank you...:))