UNFOLDING SAGA OF PRIDE

How to unfurl this story of pride?

Glory is whacking, how to embed it in my lines...

Here essence of soil brings jiffies of happiness

That tales of chronicle fills heart with pride...

The aegis of father is from Himalayas

The warmth of mother affection is from Ganges 

Sublime beauty of Hindi suffuse on my heart

Crops are singing the tale of progress apart

At every step the colors changes

Tradition and culture fragrance amazes

Rapport among folks sings songs of love

Colors of Holi, lights of Diwali always bring trust...

Architect of history leaves impression on heart

The lesson of values we have learnt from start

Where guest is given god designation

Mahatma, Bheem, Azad, you are proud of nation...

Tricolor incite the spark in our mind

Jan Gan Man, my favorite rhyme..

Fortunate are we, you made us your part...

Bless my people, my nation, my lord

Let our every step is of conviviality for all.....

                                                     

                              

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

"The aegis of father is from Himalayas
The warmth of mother affection is from Ganges
Sublime beauty of Hindi suffuse on my heart
Crops are singing the tale of progress apart

At every step the colors changes
Tradition and culture fragrance amazes"

[anne]

thank you so much sir for going through this.... :))

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:).........................

[Namrata]

Needs no words. It is a beautiful unfolding. Thank you, for sharing.

[anne]

awwh..... that's so sweet...thank you so much.... :))

[Ashira Macy]

I have been seeing all of these independence day poems and they really warm my heart. You clearly love your country, even though it has its faults as all other countries do. Beautiful work Anne!

[anne]

thank you so much Ashira for this beautiful review.... :))

[Naina]

I seriously enjoyed this journey... It is very beautiful creation Anne..... Its sad that you was not able to attend your college function, but this time I had attended my college function for the first time and i really felt great.... The feeling which I got was just awesome..... Keep writing....:)

[anne]

thank you so much Naina...extremely pleased to see your thoughts and that you attended your college function........glad you liked this one.... :))

[Naina]

pleasure is mine sweetheart......:))

[Tom]

Indeed I reiterate once more, this is a fine expressive depiction of your richly diverse country !

[anne]

aww....thank you so much Tom.... :))

[Karan Ashara]

Now that was a poem which gave me goosebumps. Absolutely fantastic!!! It is a b-e-a-utiful poem. Bless our country and bless its people.

[anne]

thank you so much Karan... :)

[Anne Timmins]

This is a beautiful piece. I enjoyed the whole thing

[anne]

thank you so much Anne... :))

[s y e]

What a lovely tribute, Anne. This was lovely... I literally loved this one.

[anne]

aww....thank you so much noodlehead...:))

[Dayran]

A great tribute to a nation that has given much to the world ... in terms of understanding. Nice ...

[anne]

thank you so much Dayran...:)

[Avanthika]

very well described Anne, excellent

[anne]

thank you so much Avanthika.... :))