Gifts Ultra Rare

This poem is a challenge to all those who consider the fairer sex as less important ,or worse, a burden and commit the violent crime of female foeticide or see them with dishonoring eyes.

     Gifts Ultra Rare

Folded in cloth, her eyes did shine

Parabola shifted by pi, ‘the daughter is mine’

Said in front of others,

How did you feel inside?

Okay let’s make a confession

It was on mother’s guide.

 

The girl grew up,

As broadens a brook.

Papa followed Mama,

She had a beautiful look.

 

Mama hugged the life

Papa was reluctant

But the daughter believed in him

Someday, he too would be resilient.

 

Then occurred an accident,

Mother had to go.

Daughter was left with father

And he got a blow.

 

Papa, papa, she said

In everything that followed.

Little did she know,

She would never be endowed.

 

Then 10 years later,

At 4 o’ clock in evening,

Daughter didn’t come home

The thought itself was aching.

For maybe he didn’t want her

He was a dad within

Was it already too late?

Got a rush of adrenaline.

 

Went to the police,

Took help of a neighbor

Nothing came in hand,

Except the morning newspaper.

 

"10 year old, raped and murdered"

Stood the headline distinct.

The face was translucent,

But the apparel succinct.

 

Dressed in mourning stands,

He who didn’t care.

Daughters are not a burden

They are gifts ultra rare.

Respect them, accept them,

Without them, the world is despair.

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Rahul]

you just build a new momentum, you didn't write a poem here you've seen me a movie, a real one.
this's a great piece, i didn't ever read such kinda piece. That's make me smile and i appreciated your thinking. you've got nice talent and deep and positive thinking as well. i can't say anything for this write. i read your this first piece and i can;t control myself to give your my hug..and my rating 100/100 :)

lovey and very emotional write at an extent. you did a great job.

[Shivam Murari]

Thanks a lot brother. Those are the most kind and encouraging words! :')
((HUGS))

[Kitbit]

This is so painful :( A bitter truth so nicely said!

[Shivam Murari]

Thanks for reading. THe scenario is sad indeed! :(

[Rogue]

This is an incredible piece you have done. So well crafted. The feelings come through perfectly.
Life is such a precious thing and should always be treated as such, no matter the sex of the being.

Wonderful work. :)

[Shivam Murari]

Thank you so much Rogue! Your reviews are always SO encouraging! :-)

[Rogue]

The pleasure is mine. It is an excellent piece. :)

[Shivam Murari]

Thanks again :)

[Poussiere D'Ange]

This is the best of all the poems that you posted here. It is inspiring, and it's that sort of a poem that ignites a spark in one. Its a poweful piece Shivam. Great great job:-):-):-D.

[Shivam Murari]

Thanks a million dear friend :)

[Poussiere D'Ange]

:-):-):-D.

[Quirkyac]

After all what is happening in our country, this poem stands as a challenge. So well written. Makes me feel it! :')

[Shivam Murari]

If it is that way, then my aim has been fulfilled! Thanks for reading :)

[Angi]

The father has lost a most precious gift, too late. It is too late.

[Shivam Murari]

He indeed had! Thanks a lot for reading and expressing, good lady! :)

[Angi]

My pleasure!

[Divyanshu Kachhap]

this one was better than the previous one !!

[Shivam Murari]

Thank you so much Divyanshu :)

[Stella Armour]

this is a theme that needs to be followed more often, boy or girl they are still a gift from God and should be treated as so...i hope more people will realize this when reading your caring poetry

[Shivam Murari]

Thank you so much, good lady! This indeed is what I wanted to say through this poem. Many people, sadly, think boys will lower their burden and girls will increase the burden. However, the case is totally different :)

[SHEEMA HUQ]

certainly an insightful cultural poem, explaining the familial ties, excellent

[Shivam Murari]

That indeed is an important topic of the poem. Thank you great lady :)

[smilempsn]

That was 'SUCH' amazing piece.. So true.. So heart touching...
I loved it so much....

I tried many-a-times to write on this topic... But everything I hold my pen(or mobile) for drafting it... I just stopped..... Nothing comes in my mind when I try to write..
I mean there is so much to say, but the words just don't come up...!!

But you , Shivam... did this so elegantly.... I loved it...

[Shivam Murari]

Thank you so much for those beautiful words! :')

[smilempsn]

pleasure was all mine :)