This poem is a challenge to all those who consider the fairer sex as less important ,or worse, a burden and commit the violent crime of female foeticide or see them with dishonoring eyes.
you just build a new momentum, you didn't write a poem here you've seen me a movie, a real one.
this's a great piece, i didn't ever read such kinda piece. That's make me smile and i appreciated your thinking. you've got nice talent and deep and positive thinking as well. i can't say anything for this write. i read your this first piece and i can;t control myself to give your my hug..and my rating 100/100 :)
lovey and very emotional write at an extent. you did a great job.
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Thanks a lot brother. Those are the most kind and encouraging words! :')
((HUGS))
A powerful message; it is so sad that any child is considered "less". All life is valuable, as you say, a "gift ultra rare". A thought provoking, well done poem, Shivam.
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Thank you so much Rita! I really pity for those who fail to recognize the value of a girl child!
I already have reviews it Shivam :)
ThankU for read request again.. ;)
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Sorry! I sent read request to everyone, so probably, there was a glitch and they sent read request t.. read moreSorry! I sent read request to everyone, so probably, there was a glitch and they sent read request to those who had already received the read request too :P
Yes, all kids are a gift and it is numbing - almost beyond understanding for much of Western culture to understand that other cultures - many other cultures view children differently - throwaways at times based on sex, social status, birth order, etc.
We cannot be casual with our offspring. We only bring eventual harm to ourselves when we are. Well penned.
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Yes, I like this fact about west that no one is considered inferior. Most of the countries (if we le.. read moreYes, I like this fact about west that no one is considered inferior. Most of the countries (if we leave out Canada, USA and UK) differentiate between male and female child. In many countries the sex ratio is so low! In others, they are not respected and the rape issues are at large!
Thank you great poet, for stopping by and reading my poem! :-)
Powerful,profound, and yes fathers should go out of their way to protect and perserve their daughter's character and way of live. Without them the world would be a place without giving nurturers. Great write. Keep up the great work. :)
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Thank you so much bpoet, for the wonderful and encouraging words. Have a great one! :-)
Could someone tell me how to Shelved some poems/story writing.
I would love to Shelved this poem in my library ;)
Shivam you are the right person do advice me how I could do that ;)
- Cheers!
Singh :)
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Thanks dear friend. Well to shelf any poem just see the upper right corner. There are a few options .. read moreThanks dear friend. Well to shelf any poem just see the upper right corner. There are a few options like "Share", "Email","Facebook","Twitter",etc. The last option is "My Library", just click on it, tick on the any shelf of your library, (General Reading, Reading List or Favorite) and add the poem to your library :-)
11 Years Ago
Thanks Mate ;) Still learning/exploring this site :D
11 Years Ago
Thanks a lot Vicky. BTW, if you are on twitter, you could follow me here : https://www.twitter.com/S.. read moreThanks a lot Vicky. BTW, if you are on twitter, you could follow me here : https://www.twitter.com/Shivam_Murari
And I will follow you back :-)
11 Years Ago
I have account on twitter but i hardly check it.. :/
as you say buddy will follow you :P .. read moreI have account on twitter but i hardly check it.. :/
as you say buddy will follow you :P
my initial interest is following girls :P Just kidding
Have to follow you ;)
oh my God, what a writing. That was so good, worded perfectly... I don't know how anyone could read this.. and not hurt for that girl. You are very talented, you've touched upon an issue, many cannot. thank you.
Shivam Murari is a student, currently aspiring to get into a good college. He loves to write poems, loads of them. He usually gets very random ideas, which he thinks are pretty cool, and in the proces.. more..