This is a poem dealing with the constant heartbreak-move-on nature of the present era. The various points of this phase has been depicted in the poem.
I've been thinking for some time Sitting here and remembering words that rhyme Poem and songs take the stress away And if u write them yourself they are drowned in bay.
People come and people go We get up, get sad and cry, oh! Then we remember the beautiful times we had We think we have lost our clad Experiences only teach us and show we are stronger than this But we are always stuck thinking "Why only I was chosen for this?" Everyone has pain, some have more , some have less. We keep wondering, "why the irregularity?" And then somehow we forgive Sometimes...We Just Live.
Similar things happened to me again and again I kept wondering why I put my life in drain People came to me, but all they did was betray Others came and held me and made the thoughts sway With time they left too Every time I knew, I just knew. I get mixed with emotions of rage, betrayal and revenge But then I knew I couldn't avenge I am not made for this, I am meant to just give Sometimes....We Just Live
Nature never deceives us; it is always we who deceive ourselves...then there wont be any friend or foe...
so emotional and heart touching.It talks about siting alone watching a bay pouring the sad and pleased memories into it ...few people come and go like a wind....awesome poetry.yea it made an effect indeed.
I can clearly identify with the emotions and feelings here. It is something many of us have dealt with (especially when it comes to those online). Over time we may learn to expect it, but we never really get used to it. It still causes pain each time it happens.
Hope that answered you authors' note questions. Very nice work. :)
this was a sad poem, great content, full of actual problems... happenings in our lives daily, our pains, our stresses... its all their incorporated in a way that makes the readers (me anyway) know you feel the same way. I like poems that are like this, that shows the writer feels the words that they are writing. but it's true, the fact that sometimes we just live... just have to let go... and be okay with it, no longer searching for something better, or getting revenge. You worded it perfectly. :) I loved it.
Most of do feel like this at some point of time, I am sure. I am glad you received the poem so well!.. read moreMost of do feel like this at some point of time, I am sure. I am glad you received the poem so well! Thank you so much :)
11 Years Ago
your welcome, thank you for expressing this poem in such a way that we feel the words. :)
Well i agree...we just live sometimes..let life have its way with us.
The poem beautifully represented life and its sorrows and happiness. This is a great accomplishment. I really enjoyed reading this:-):-):-D.
This poem made me feel sad, it does not seem as if it was written in a happy frame of mind. Hopefully you feel better after having written it and are better now.
I agree sometimes we just live - as Bill Hicks said, 'life is a ride'. We just sometimes let it happen.
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
You're right Jonathan. Sometimes, we just prefer to live, after all! And yea, I felt really nice aft.. read moreYou're right Jonathan. Sometimes, we just prefer to live, after all! And yea, I felt really nice after writing it as I said
"If u write them yourself they are drowned in bay"
Besides, the poem was well received and I love the fact that it has more than 500 views! I never thought that would happen! Many accomplished poets on the site don't have so many views. I am just so thankful to everyone :) ^_^
Shivam Murari is a student, currently aspiring to get into a good college. He loves to write poems, loads of them. He usually gets very random ideas, which he thinks are pretty cool, and in the proces.. more..