This is a poem dealing with the constant heartbreak-move-on nature of the present era. The various points of this phase has been depicted in the poem.
I've been thinking for some time Sitting here and remembering words that rhyme Poem and songs take the stress away And if u write them yourself they are drowned in bay.
People come and people go We get up, get sad and cry, oh! Then we remember the beautiful times we had We think we have lost our clad Experiences only teach us and show we are stronger than this But we are always stuck thinking "Why only I was chosen for this?" Everyone has pain, some have more , some have less. We keep wondering, "why the irregularity?" And then somehow we forgive Sometimes...We Just Live.
Similar things happened to me again and again I kept wondering why I put my life in drain People came to me, but all they did was betray Others came and held me and made the thoughts sway With time they left too Every time I knew, I just knew. I get mixed with emotions of rage, betrayal and revenge But then I knew I couldn't avenge I am not made for this, I am meant to just give Sometimes....We Just Live
Nature never deceives us; it is always we who deceive ourselves...then there wont be any friend or foe...
so emotional and heart touching.It talks about siting alone watching a bay pouring the sad and pleased memories into it ...few people come and go like a wind....awesome poetry.yea it made an effect indeed.
Nature never deceives us; it is always we who deceive ourselves...then there wont be any friend or foe...
so emotional and heart touching.It talks about siting alone watching a bay pouring the sad and pleased memories into it ...few people come and go like a wind....awesome poetry.yea it made an effect indeed.
Betrayal really hurts and hurts us deep .One cannot come to terms with it.But you have reconciled to this fact in your life '"But then I knew.........we just give"- as most people do because they cannot avenge themselves and have to continue living. Good write !!!
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This poem reflects how a person sits in thought and the thoughts that come to mind. I love the title. Enjoyed reading!
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Thats exactly how it was written. It was automatic. I sat to think and it occurred instantly. Thanks.. read moreThats exactly how it was written. It was automatic. I sat to think and it occurred instantly. Thanks, great poet :)
Yes, it did make a positive effect on me to remember to encourage, and uplift others, and to allow them to trust me as betrayal hurts so very much!
Your message is clear, and strikes a chord for others to remember how lonely life may be so they may be better friends one to the other!!
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Thank you so much fine lady. Your stopping by and reviewing my poem is highly appreciated :)
Shivam Murari is a student, currently aspiring to get into a good college. He loves to write poems, loads of them. He usually gets very random ideas, which he thinks are pretty cool, and in the proces.. more..