Bullying

I have never written poetry, it is a far too great form of writing for me. However i thought of sharing this special one i had given an attempt at when I was in 7th grade.

You see me

But only my appearance,

You hear me

But only my silence,

You feel me

But only my pain.

 

Oh, you see me

But not my worth,

Oh, you hear me

But not my wise words,

Oh, you feel me

But not my strength.

 

Such a shame,

That you have

eyes that can’t see,

ears that can’t hear

and a heart that can’t feel

a true Beauty.

 

Let me

Show you my greatest gifts

Tell you my smartest advises

Express my warmest feelings

And you will understand,

Hating and bullying gets us nothing but loss.

Author's Note

Gee, I know its pretty simple.Afterall, it's just an attempt :)
Do review. Love, Shivai.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree.
"Let me
Show you my greatest gifts
Tell you my smartest advises
Express my warmest feelings
And you will understand,
Hating and bullying gets us nothing but loss."
Great wisdom in the poem. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry. Need to be read by more people.
Coyote

[wordman]

lets try another one
only stupid people bully,they have no self worth so all they know is to try to bring people down to there level

[Shivai]

Thank you!

[Ghazal]

So true....... But only those who live bullying can tell such a poem ... I assume

[Shivai]

Oh no no, I just happen to have a best-friend who has been through it.

[Spaceman26]

Great poem. So true that bulling causes nothing be destructive loss in the end. You hit it right on the spot!

[Shivai]

Thank you so much!

[Pushkar Prabhat]

so truthful............
simplicity is the best...........
hating and bullying is a loss indeed.......
beautiful write.......
i loved it!!!
:)

[Shivai]

Thank you!!! :)

[HummingMaster]

I like it, the poem has a great massage and a very useful advice.

[Shivai]

Thank you!! :)