I Hope Your Days Get A Little Better, And Your Eyes A Little Bluer.

I Hope Your Days Get A Little Better, And Your Eyes A Little Bluer.

A Poem by ShittyBakaFace
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His eyes are green when hes upset, gray when hes indifferent, But when hes happy his eyes get so pretty, such a deep blue with a gold rim around the pupils

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I hope your days get a little better,

And your eyes a little bluer.

I hope that smile stays forever,

And the tears a little fewer.

 

I hope to feel that warm embrace,

A fire seeping into bone.

Add a kiss to make my heart race,

Let me know im not alone.

 

I hope to hear that silky sound,

that sends shivers down my spine.

That sounds that makes the world go round,

Your voice is a favorite of mine.

 

I hope that we will stay together,

And never be apart.

And even if it doesnt last forever,

You will always have my heart.

 

I hope your days get a little better,

And your eyes a little bluer.

I hope that smile stays forever,

And the tears a little fewer.

© 2010 ShittyBakaFace


Author's Note

ShittyBakaFace
About a boy. Yes, the same boy as in all of my poems.

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"I hope that smile stays forever
And the tears a little fewer"
Aw, how cute! Love the line, it's so amazingly true, wishful for the ones you love! ^.^
" I hope that we will stay together,
And never be apart,
...
You will always have my heart"
Such an amazing feeling. this poem kept on getting better and better, I really adored it!
And the fact that it repeated itself at the end made those lines a bit more dramatic, which really is a good thing.
Fantastic writing, simply beautiful!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I love this. A lot. :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


"I hope that smile stays forever
And the tears a little fewer"
Aw, how cute! Love the line, it's so amazingly true, wishful for the ones you love! ^.^
" I hope that we will stay together,
And never be apart,
...
You will always have my heart"
Such an amazing feeling. this poem kept on getting better and better, I really adored it!
And the fact that it repeated itself at the end made those lines a bit more dramatic, which really is a good thing.
Fantastic writing, simply beautiful!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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