Twist in The thorn

A Poem dedicated to the anger that stays within me and won't stop ruining all the good days

 Don't stare at me like you know who I am.

Don't control me like a King and the Horse he rides.

I hate every view you see me through...

 

I hate the silence, 

I hate the depression,

But I hate the Anger the most.

 

Don't rip my throat out with those cruel words,

Don't try to convince me with that tone,

You, bitter anger, are only ruining the good days that come to me.

Reviews

[Thorn]

Nicely done. ^^

It actually reminds me of a person, who does try to ruin my day often.

But it works as an anger poem too. I think you've done a good job. ^^

[Lunar Lightning]

Very nicely done, and very easy to relate to. We all have that bitterness inside us and those who speak it have it worse off than those who just tune it out. Great job.

Luna