featured inside out

just wondering...

what if you lept above other world crescent

me pondering beliefs there would be

funny becoming acquaintances from far flung places

each nursing Renaissance whims

 

 

necessity escapes tweaking

perception of impressions

when it comes to your

 

 

you haven't seen a sliver beyond my face

I cringe at how many myths are erased

once you have truly beheld me

should the outer interfere with magnified illusions

 

discovering contrary a wine bottles veneer

which the face condemns with innocent edge

or would you see the heart as substitute

instead of motherland accents curvaceous stems

if suddenly the chance we should meet

cleverly camouflage rare plain of sight

 

 

present all valued aesthetically correct

clear is softness of full lips…comely eyes

 

 

while anticipating a union could despise an unveiling

seeking continual optimism in your eyes

that what appears frontally would be satisfaction

sufficient matching my mind

where every inch is deserving

of a muse

 

Reviews

[Stephen]

Very deep piece of art. Many verses`re revealing the mystery of life how beautiful it is with love.

[willweb]

Extremely deatiled and created a lot of thought. Very good poem.

[Shirlena]

Thank you dahling :)

[Jumbo J]

Magnified illusions equals a reality of the heart... and this just gave way to to my intrigue, as you paint such a enticing picture... What a stunning insight into something that holds my breath and lightens my heart... 'where every inch is deserving of a muse' what a way to finish... with thoughts that just linger on possibilities... ah, this has just taken me to where a lot of your writing takes me, as you have such a knack for engaging the reader to participate within the story... and you know how I would love to be a segment to inspire the greatness that seeps from such full rich lips... outstanding lady! xx

[Shirlena]

And YOU :)...no thanks J I'm glad you see all of the fabulous traits that you describe in my poetry. I can't take that sort of credit but I'm glad you want to bestow it love. Thank you.

[Sami Khalil]

Souls need sufficient matching, mind need sufficient knowing and hearts need sufficient bonding. As you value all of that, you erase all myths about love and life...Excellent...:)...............

[Shirlena]

I would rather be on the right side of love Sami :). Thank you sweetie.

[Sami Khalil]

Yep. So true. You are welcome...:)..............

[Wuji]

A poetry of perception, very subjective with agreeable verge. It's very contemporary and you end your poetry always with very fine lines. I'd like to think your style is quite post-modern and psycho-subliminal.

You write that accessible kind of verse, that makes the audience curious about the actual person behind the author.

[Shirlena]

Wuji you really say the nicest things and I'm really appreciative of your supportive commentary. Thank you, can't stop smiling.