dare she expose a stargazer

private thought

...off the backs of someone else's

intimate concoction

dropped into the lap out of nowhere

when she wasn't studying 

interims of attachment

(she's lying)

no inkling of impulses

succulent assault unsuspected angles

lurking in egregious geometry

and yet sensations to the point

of loosening closure

pushing back rigid collar

at this hour her neck seeks resuscitation

reanimate it's loveliness

perhaps emancipated for his mouth

that favors to slide down half

then appeal opposite post...neglected

hasn't had the thrill anon

(just one sip)

steal heady flowers of lotus bouquet

follow whiffs of naked warmth

emanating henna shoulders

challenging a presence to hibernate

loitering...infinitely at the nape

this instance she howls

an odyssey she long forgot

(yes)

him merciful where she has ached

among constellation

Reviews

[anne p. murray- LadeeAn..]

Your love of writing shows in this very eloquent piece. Great work Shirlena

anne

[Shirlena]

I'm just out there anne and it's a privilege to have you read it lol.

[Sami Khalil]

"no inkling of impulses

succulent assault unsuspected angles

lurking in egregious geometry

and yet sensations to the point

of loosening closure"


I feel this stagazer is offering you bouquets of flowers, wining and dining you, trying to reanimate loveliness and then to assault the suspected angles of your geometry. You should have a sign that says:" No loitering." Only serious requests accepted...Joking at the end...A marvelous write...:)........................

[Shirlena]

Thank you Sam...so sweet of you and I love your interpretation better than my own lol.

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. Good to know. You are welcome...:).......................

[Lyn Anderson]

I like where this takes the reader, in multiple directions, like a good poem should.

[Shirlena]

Yeah, twist a poor mind every which way don't it? :) Thanks KL

[A. Amos]

Your creativity shines in this well written poem. Your one word lines at the end of the verse are very effective. What I love about your poetry is...always something new. Great writing my friend.

[Shirlena]

Aww thank you so much A love...carries so much weight the way you say it :).

[A. Amos]

You know I'm your true fan:) your most welcome

[Shirlena]

*Blushing* Thank you :)...the feeling is mutual.